Comments on: Anneau du Rhin 2.0 http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77 All-day insanity or I have a blog too! Fri, 10 Feb 2012 15:16:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1.3 By: David http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4657 David Wed, 14 May 2008 19:44:36 +0000 http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4657 "the god parts of it"... God may have had a hand in making this day perfect, but I think you meant "good" ;) "Overall there were about 50 people attended" --> "Overall there were ... attending" or "Overall about 50 people attended" "These people where split" --> "were split" "I had to be very carefully and slow me down" --> "I had to be very careful and slow down" or "... and reduce the speed" Cheers! :) “the god parts of it”… God may have had a hand in making this day perfect, but I think you meant “good” ;)

“Overall there were about 50 people attended” –> “Overall there were … attending” or “Overall about 50 people attended”

“These people where split” –> “were split”

“I had to be very carefully and slow me down” –> “I had to be very careful and slow down” or “… and reduce the speed”

Cheers!
:)

]]> By: Guido http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4658 Guido Wed, 14 May 2008 20:18:45 +0000 http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4658 *lol* Of course I meant good ;-) Thanks again! =>changed *lol* Of course I meant good ;-)

Thanks again!

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]]> By: Lukas http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4681 Lukas Thu, 15 May 2008 09:35:33 +0000 http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4681 "think back at" -> "think back to" "bike and moreover" -> "bike. Moreover" "After that we including our bikes were ready for the track." -> "After that, we, including our bikes, were ready for the track." "Again we made 20” turns" -> "Again we worked in 20' turns" “think back at” -> “think back to”
“bike and moreover” -> “bike. Moreover”
“After that we including our bikes were ready for the track.” -> “After that, we, including our bikes, were ready for the track.”
“Again we made 20” turns” -> “Again we worked in 20′ turns”

]]> By: Guido http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4683 Guido Thu, 15 May 2008 10:33:42 +0000 http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4683 Strange sentence with all those commas ;-) The best would be to rewrite it... => changed Strange sentence with all those commas ;-) The best would be to rewrite it…

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]]> By: Lenherr http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4774 Lenherr Sun, 18 May 2008 00:42:14 +0000 http://blog.zgraggen.name/archives/77#comment-4774 looks awesome! looks awesome!

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